With new world words set out against virtual sky
Like a still-corded baby upon a belly;
Let us surf through certain half-deserted tweets,
The stuttering retweets
Of restless nights in one-post cheap no-tells
And no-comment days and reader swells;
Posts that meander like a convoluted love quarrel
Of theatrical intent
That leads us to an overwhelming question…
Oh do not ask, “What the fuck?”
Let us go and try our luck.
In the comment boxes readers come and go
Helping our community grow.
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The stealthy beast that rubs its back upon our labor’s pains
The black serpent that rubs its belly on our labor’s pains
Forked its tongue into the corners of our lives
Lingered upon the spills that stand beside the sink
Let fall upon its back the bytes that fall from fingers
Jogged past the strollers, made a sudden strike
And seeing that it was an indifferent May night
Curled once about the well, and clicked “sleep.”
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And indeed there will be time
For the snaking posts that slide along our street
Rubbing their backs upon our labor’s pains;
There is no time; there is no time
Like NOW to drop the masks that we adorn;
There once was time to parent and create
And time for bills and UNO hands
That lift and drop a post into our box;
Time for you and time for me
And time yet to drop revisions
And for the relinquishment of grand visions
Before the posting for all to see.
In the comment boxes readers come and go
Helping our community grow.
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And indeed there is no time
To wonder, “Do we dare?” And “Does anyone care?”
Time to dance like Tom Cruise in Tropic Thunder
Unappologetic asses shakin’ it in the quiet before the mirror
[They will say: “He’s actually gay!”]
Our sweats caked foul with baby puke
Our sleeping shirts stained with infant feces—
[They will say, “How she has become a new species!”]
Do we Dare
Participate in this blogosphere?
To sing our song amidst the throng
Unsure if any really hear.
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No! I am not Deuce nor Motherlode, not even trying;
Cloaked in invisibility and few vying
To be deep daddy bloggers in the Motherland
Yet on sincerity and authenticity I take my stand
Over-intellectual, insecure and anxious
Verbose, well-meaning, eager to thank us
For reading, thinking, showing up
For posts on children throwing up
Jung at heart and a bit obscure
Saying some things, but exactly what we can’t be sure
I’ve heard the bloggers singing each to each.
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I think that they do sing to me.
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I’ve read them posting skyward on the web
Weaving Ariadne’s thread cut not by Fates
Hermes linking, co-winky-dinking, silk by silk
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We have lingered in the salons of the web
By thee—moms wreathed with visions and with cake
Whose real voices move us and we wake
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I just read your salon piece at Motherese, which lead me here. Blogging is still new to me, but I love how you frame it. This place where we can speak without our masks, where we can add a brick to a cathedral to community… Wonderful.
Hi Kate, Thanks for dropping by and doing a bit of virtual brick-work. Here’s to community, here’s to whistling while we work. Namaste
We find time to write because we can’t help it. We find time to read because we can’t help it.
I don’t know why and that’s the part I like the very best.
I completely agree—I too, cannot seem to help it, and I too like that it’s something of a mystery.
Now aren’t you clever? I love the Prufrock, and you did quite well!
My favorite line in Eliot’s version is the “measure out our lives in coffee spoons.” What do you suppose we bloggers use to measure out our lives?
Hey KW, glad to hear you’re a fellow Prufrock resonator.
In a way perhaps we measure out our lives upon our laps (laptops as well as those real laps into which there is always room for one more thing, even if it feels like a steamroller and we’re a pancake, perhaps a crepe).
or…
For we have shared it all already, bled it all:—
We’ve breakfast toasted and playdate hosted,
We’ve measured out our lives in what we’ve posted;
We have known childrens’ voices crying with a whining call
Tuned to an infant monitored from a farther room.
So why on earth should we presume?
Brilliant! Have you been hanging out at Wolf’s poetry conference? I need to take lessons!
I missed Wolf’s conference—I’m waiting for either the symposium or the bacchanal :)